Girls have no freedom compared to boys.
Girls have no voice compared to boys.
I am from a house hold where the male figure thinks he is above all and that he can talk to women as he pleases. Because he's a man and since I am a girl I have to sit there and bite my tongue while he yells at me and tells me I am not going anywhere in life.
I am from a life where children have no real life experience are "paranoid".
When in reality they do not want to do something unless it has something in it for them.
I am from a family where parents do not care if I look back on my life 20 years from now and that I have no real life experiences or exciting memories to look back and laugh at.
I am from a family with you just sit still and wait and for your coming of age .
Very emotional and well written.
ReplyDeleteVery powerful piece I can tell it came from the heart
ReplyDeleteYour story was sad it went right to the heart, and it seems as if you put heart and time into it.
ReplyDeleteI loved the tone of your poem it holds a ton of emotion and power
ReplyDeleteYou really got into your feelings I like how you express it throughout your writing.
ReplyDeleteJelly,
ReplyDeleteI can only imagine some of the experiences you must be going through. Thank you for trusting us to share this piece. I know you are strong and will stand through this.
Where are your poetic devices.
ReplyDeleteI can tell threw you text that you feel for this issue you are a very good writer I can tell what you feel nice job
ReplyDeleteDo you believe that you live in a all male dominated society?
ReplyDeleteI am from a family where you just sit still and wait for your coming of age stuck out the most to me. I find that part very interesting.
ReplyDeleteDo you disagree with how the male figure in your household feels against women?
ReplyDeleteNice repetition with i am I am
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very powerful and it sounded very personal also.
ReplyDeleteI feel really bad that your going through these.
ReplyDeleteI can tell your voice is that of anger at what you're describing. In general I could feel high levels of emotion in this writing. Awesome job.
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